VERBAL REPRESENTATION OF A CHARACTER`S INTERNAL CONFLICT IN  FICTION AND TRANSLATION: B. ANTONENKO-DAVYDOVYCH`S SMERT'  AND ITS ENGLISH VERSION BY YU. TKACH

Zoriana Kotsiuba

Zoriana Kotsiuba Ivan Franko National University of Lviv https://orcid.org/0000-0001-7702-1377

Keywords: inner conflict, artistic text, semantics, stylistics, verbalization, reproduction

Abstract

The article deals with the broad and complex issue of verbalizing a character’s internal conflict in literary texts and examines the specificities of its transmission in the target language. It reveals that the internal conflict of the main character in B. Antonenko-Davydovych’s Smert' (Death) is constructed through a complex interplay of lexical, stylistic, and syntactic devices, which transform psychological struggle into an intense narrative experience. Special attention is paid to the keyword неприємно which is traced throughout the entire artistic text and becomes a verbal marker of Kost Horobenko’s internal conflict, mapping the shifts in the character’s emotional state. Yu. Tkach’s translation is examined with particular attention to the achievement of pragmatic equivalence, focusing not only on the accurate transfer of propositional meaning but also on the preservation of the emotional intensity and rhetorical force that shape the stylistic impact of the source text. Consideration is given to the risk of attenuation in translation, whereby the focus shifts from moral and existential torment toward milder, more neutral emotional states, thus partially diminishing the dramatic effect intended by the author.

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